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Ode to Cuteness by ~WindShaman:iconWindShaman:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Blight not, a single
one upon, this perfection

a nose to tweek
cheeks worth a pinch
a rosy smile

Play the fiery chords
not of blues, but sunlight
LEAD to alabaster bone
accidentally caught

Tweek the chipmunks
Tweek the rose from them
©2009 ~WindShaman
:iconwindshaman:

Author's Comments

Ok, I honestly wrote this a long time ago while attempting to write a poem about a friend.

The thing is, I thought it was crap when I wrote.. then wrote something I thought was much better. Woke up the next morning to read the "better" one, and found it to be utter crap and this one to be alright!

So, it may not be new, but I think it's time I gave you SOMETHING for being so kind, and pushing me every now and then whenever I hear or see you guys/gals (mostly gals ;P)

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:iconpeter-the-fisherman:
~Peter-the-Fisherman Jun 19, 2009, 3:04:38 PM
Chipmunks... not as cute as bunnies.

:iconbwavoplz: Nice poem beeteedubs.

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For He so loved the world that he gave his only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him might not perish but might have eternal life.
~ John 3:16
:iconwindshaman:
~WindShaman Jun 19, 2009, 6:00:36 PM
but I'm referring to chipmunk-like cheeks... bunnies don't have cute cheeks ;P

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"Speak to me, with your heart..."

-Rocco Deluca & the Burden-
:iconnightmary:
~nightmary Jun 19, 2009, 6:43:10 PM
hell yeah, we girls will keep givin you kicks in the pants so you keep going!

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"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known."
:iconpeter-the-fisherman:
~Peter-the-Fisherman Jun 19, 2009, 7:07:49 PM
nice point... bunny cheeks are the worst sheeks in the universe.

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For He so loved the world that he gave his only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him might not perish but might have eternal life.
~ John 3:16
:iconwindshaman:
~WindShaman Jun 20, 2009, 8:13:38 PM
in the backside only, please.. I don't need a kick to the walnuts to get me going, just yet^^;

--
"Speak to me, with your heart..."

-Rocco Deluca & the Burden-
:iconnightmary:
~nightmary Jun 21, 2009, 12:11:47 PM
hahahahahahahahaha... that is what I meant. I don't think a kick in the family jewels ever makes people more motivated to do anything other that curl over in blinding pain. :P

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"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known."
:iconwindshaman:
~WindShaman Jun 30, 2009, 1:29:24 AM
well, they wouldn't want it to happen again?^^;

Great behavioral modification I guess ;P

--
"Speak to me, with your heart..."

-Rocco Deluca & the Burden-
:iconnightmary:
~nightmary Jun 30, 2009, 7:10:46 AM
eee.. no thanks, I was never an advocate of negative reinforcement. Also, I think that falls under the category of cruel and unusual punishment.

Although... I'm sure Darwin would have wonderful things to say about a program where you kicked in the groin every time you do something wrong. :P

--
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known."
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