He limped into the front door, wanting nothing less than a puff and cup of mocha.
The place was dimly lit, as any good coffee shop is. Posters of this and that band lined the walls, from shows long past. Even a crappy black and white advertisement for a Nirvana concert. In it Kurt Cobains hair was matted, as always, with that pose where hes up front right by the camera while the rest of the band stands off to the side on some steps, or something. Oh, and there were those stupid Support the Troops, End the War signs, which really only shows how gullible members of political parties can be.
But as he stepped in, leg muscle still twitching, his body relaxed. The sweet smell of bitter coffee filled the air, practically bathing the world inside with a brown aura which may as well have been gold. Nothing gets to him like coffee, nothing (well, except the smell of his girlfriends hair). Limping behind the counter to Maddy, the first shift barista, he dazedly smiled at her before turning off into Employees Only hallway at the far left end of the counter.
Down the hall and first door on the left, there his locker was. Sighing, he tugged off the left sleeve of his black fleece coat slowly. His shoulders and arms were still marked with bruises visited upon them from the accident.
the accident, he grimaced.
Hey, Love, said Maddy whod managed to sneak behind him into the locker room.
Hey Maddy, how was your day?
Ive been worried, about you.
Im fine, he said, very unconvincingly.
Bull shit, you shouldnt be here every day. Take the job your friend mentioned, and go someplace else.
This ones fine, he said, still unconvincing.
Then its time for you to wake up and smell the coffee. Your job is to stay away from this place from now on, got it? Then Maddy was on the ground, bloodied, torn dress barely covering herself. And he stood over her, horrified. It had happened again, only this time
this time
hed been too late to stop the mugger from
from
Looking into her accusing eyes, she faded, while he screamed at the heartache and loss of his love, Maddy.
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He woke sitting up on the couch in his living room in a cold sweat, sobbing. Shed left him, Maddy had really left him.
Amber hair and all, she was gone. No more gorgeous grins or smiles. No more practical jokes, or dancing lessons filled with laughter.
Hun, you alright?! said a voice from the recliner across from him.
It was Maddy.
There had never been an accident, it was all in his head
or was it? The truth was that they both worked at a coffee shop in a bad neighborhood, and shed almost been mugged and
forced to do things, the week before. He couldnt let that happen again
hed take the job his friend had given him.
Quickly, he brushed off the blue cotton blanket from his lap and walked over to Maddy. As she looked up at his face, he kissed her full on the mouth letting his worry and all soothe itself away, as they both sighed & breathed life into one another
Love, are you okay? Maddys navy blue eyes were cracked, hand delicately resting upon his chin; her entire posture stricken with concern.
Yeah, Im just thinking that we should move to that apartment your brother was talking about and get out of this place.
She smiled at him, glad hed finally been able to make the decision she knew her Love would. Everything would be coffee and roses again
without the crappy posters.















Comments
Funny, this place reminds me of Eastown
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For He so loved the world that he gave his only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him might not perish but might have eternal life.
~ John 3:16
thanks so much, especially for the
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"Speak to me, with your heart..."
-Rocco Deluca & the Burden-
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For He so loved the world that he gave his only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him might not perish but might have eternal life.
~ John 3:16
the only thing that seems off to me is the fact that he refers to the first incident as an accident...
it makes the next incident almost seem like some kind of supernatural event before you explain that it was a mugger. It also seems like if they both knew that whatever the "accident" was (since we don't know from this story), was related to the people in the area, and their intentions about the coffee shop (and/or Maddy), that he wouldn't refer to it as an accident.
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"Don't ask yourself what the world needs. Ask yourself what makes you come alive, and then go and do that. Because what the world needs is people who have come alive." - Harold Whitman
thank you! that's definitely something I need to work on
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"Speak to me, with your heart..."
-Rocco Deluca & the Burden-
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